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# Anatomy of a Premise Line

**Brand:** jeff lyons
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## Customer Reviews

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    JEFF is A STORY STRUCTURE GOD
  

*by M***A on Reviewed in the United States on April 12, 2022*

I have been working on my memoir EIGHT yes EIGHT years and when I started pitching it, editors would ask me what my story was about!!. Jeff Lyons was recommended to me by a NYT bestselling author who said Jeff was brilliant. And she was right. In my first free consult with him, I explained my book and in 20 minutes  he figured out the major problem with my story. I signed up for his 5 week class and bought the book.  Throughout his process of developing a story structure for my memoir, Jeff and I had weekly one on ones in addition to the weekly class and tons of feedback on our weekly assignments. In addition to being brilliant, the great thing about Jeff is that he is patient and kind. THANK YOU. I have a structure for my story.

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    Writers will find pitching a cinch after reading this book
  

*by B***M on Reviewed in the United States on August 25, 2020*

So...I knew I had a good story and believed it was well-written, but was having great difficulty knowing how to condense a 100K novel into a compelling pitch in order to submit it successfully to literary agents and publishers. Ah, the dreaded submission process!Enter Jeff Lyons. I "found" him via Reedsy where he was offering a free podcast to writers of all stripes who needed help conveying what their books were REALLY about. Based on how impressed I was by the clear process he used, that is outlined in this book, I engaged Jeff to help me -- with stunning results.Here's where Anatomy of a Premise Line becomes golden. If you already have a handle on your story, this process is a cinch to follow. If you don't, it will really highlight problems (like, maybe you really don't have much of a plot?) you might otherwise not see until you've written tens of thousands of words that need to be scrapped (or self-published, with only your Mum and Auntie willing to read them).If you were trying to paint a masterpiece and had barely picked up a paintbrush before, you might want to start with a "paint-by-numbers" set (or maybe I'm revealing my age here and they don't make those anymore!). Similarly, we long-form writers often have trouble taking on the role of advertising executive or marketing expert and boiling down the core of our work into a paragraph or less. Jeff's step-by-step process, illustrated with lots of examples, is a similarly essential guide to producing a premise line, tag line and all the other "lines" that studio execs, literary agents, and publishers want to have grab them before they commit to taking your work.And, once you have this nailed, novelists (like me) you'll have the back cover blurb done and dusted!!A highly recommended read.

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    It's hard work, but it works
  

*by D***. on Reviewed in the United States on July 24, 2018*

This book is a revelation. I have read other books, and tried different methods, and never produced a coherent story. They were all bad. Now, reading this book and following the steps, my story is clear, it's organic, it's solid.I won't lie, it's hard work.Some of the concepts are tough to grasp, not that they are complicated but it's not easy to change your approach. But once you do, you understand the building blocks of a story, and knowing these can build a foundation to lay the rest of your story on.I cannot recommend this book highly enough. Layer by layer, it shows how to build a storyWhere I failed before, one thing Jeff goes into is the difference between a story and a situation (both are equally good). A situation is a tale where the protagonist has no personal growth, and simply solves a problem and the tale is over. Poirot doesn't change, he solves the crime, and is the same as always. Gravity - Sandra Bullock gets back on Earth, and the movie ends. Both are situations.A story is where the character has a moral dilemma to overcome. In Jaws, Roy Sheider is afraid of the water, but goes out on a boat to kill a monster shark. He overcomes his fear and saves the island.The books I read taught me how to write a situation; problem is I had a story. Using Jeff's methods I was able to iron out the kinks. With my characters, and my setup, I had the wrong story. I changed the setting, I changed the outcome, and everything snapped in place. It's hard work, but jeeze it works.I thought I was a pantser, the other systems never worked. I was wrong, this really works. .

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